Completed The World Inside my Room

Macer84 · Feb 8, 2023

The game looks gorgeous! Can't wait to play it!

Karthik_ · Feb 9, 2023

Oh man first jam game

, The game looks cool, evee portrait looks soo cute, can't wait to play it!

Dr Pisy · Feb 21, 2023

Can't wait to play it <3

KennyCatches · Feb 23, 2023

What a short and sweet game!

Things I loved:

The PMD portraits, and how they faded in/out smoothly
The Umbreon sprites and animations were really well made
The music box soundtrack
How each eeveelution represented something

Overall, this was a fun little game. Good job!

StarWolff · Feb 23, 2023

KennyCatches said:
What a short and sweet game!

Things I loved:

The PMD portraits, and how they faded in/out smoothly

The Umbreon sprites and animations were really well made

The music box soundtrack

How each eeveelution represented something

Overall, this was a fun little game. Good job!

thanks! Farfetch'd story and Omori were my biggest inspirations!

Tomix9tomix · Feb 25, 2023

Some thoughts:

I really enjoyed this game! It felt like a very clean experience, I only encountered 1 bug with opening the trainer card. You had a message you wanted to tell and you were able to tell it in a complete way. Once again you made a game focused on a narrative experience and I think you've managed to once again excel at it!

The presentation was amazing, all the sprites were very cute, I loved the home apartment and all the sections dedicated to different parts or Runa, The title screen and clefairy game title screen were all really cute. The monsterous versions of Umbreon were sensational, and the music choices were great to go along with the game. All the endings felt like they had a nice amount of effort put into them as well, even the bad ending had a pretty beautiful sequence play out with it.

I was very surprised by how heavy the story ended up being, which isn't a bad thing by any means. But it is surprising that while I've seen many fangames that include content warnings when they probably don't need to, it is the cutesy looking pink eevee game that I think needs a content warning the most

This is a minor nitpick, but there were a few times when I'd complete actions and the other npcs wouldn't acknowledge it. E.g getting milk and vaporeon telling me to still get milk. Or flareon telling me I can play more if I want after I've completed the whole game. But also I should say that I really enjoyed all the flavour text and dialogue.

But yeah, great game! Keep up the good work!

StarWolff · Feb 25, 2023

Tomix9tomix said:
Some thoughts:

I really enjoyed this game! It felt like a very clean experience, I only encountered 1 bug with opening the trainer card. You had a message you wanted to tell and you were able to tell it in a complete way. Once again you made a game focused on a narrative experience and I think you've managed to once again excel at it!

The presentation was amazing, all the sprites were very cute, I loved the home apartment and all the sections dedicated to different parts or Runa, The title screen and clefairy game title screen were all really cute. The monsterous versions of Umbreon were sensational, and the music choices were great to go along with the game. All the endings felt like they had a nice amount of effort put into them as well, even the bad ending had a pretty beautiful sequence play out with it.

I was very surprised by how heavy the story ended up being, which isn't a bad thing by any means. But it is surprising that while I've seen many fangames that include content warnings when they probably don't need to, it is the cutesy looking pink eevee game that I think needs a content warning the most

This is a minor nitpick, but there were a few times when I'd complete actions and the other npcs wouldn't acknowledge it. E.g getting milk and vaporeon telling me to still get milk. Or flareon telling me I can play more if I want after I've completed the whole game. But also I should say that I really enjoyed all the flavour text and dialogue.

But yeah, great game! Keep up the good work!

Thanks for your review!
Oh I may have forgotten to add a trigger warning, I'll do that now

Looking at the game again it really lacked more rewards, like the milk part, and the "secrets" were too hidden, I think nobody will see Sprigatito's horror face, get Pheromosa drunk or Save Leafeon's garden

But oh well, I learned a lot from this game, I actually made it in 10 days bcz I knew I would be too busy, and I'm more than happy with the result

Tomix9tomix · Feb 25, 2023

StarWolff said:
Thanks for your review!
Oh I may have forgotten to add a trigger warning, I'll do that now
Looking at the game again it really lacked more rewards, like the milk part, and the "secrets" were too hidden, I think nobody will see Sprigatito's horror face, get Pheromosa drunk or Save Leafeon's garden
But oh well, I learned a lot from this game, I actually made it in 10 days bcz I knew I would be too busy, and I'm more than happy with the result

oh wow it is cool to learn there are more secrets, I'll just say, make secrets in ways that enjoy you. Not every player needs to find all the secrets, or any secrets at all. And I'm sure to the player that does find them, it will feel very rewarding. I think adding secrets in games is a pretty fun thing for devs to do, so make sure you do it in whatever way that you enjoy!

Mega Greninja · Feb 28, 2023

Jumpscare had me jumping out of my seat

... Great game! Definition of short and sweet!

Tomix9tomix · Mar 8, 2023

pepsilon said:
This game was pretty funny! I loved Omori so I enjoy parodies like this one.
What's the third ending? I got the good ending and the bad ending but I can't figure out what the third ending could be.

this is spoiler marked but it will just tell you how to activate the 3rd ending but not anything about it

After you finish the video game, go back and play some more. Continue as normal and just don't do the bad ending, and the new ending will happen.

DemICE · Mar 9, 2023

This was a fun little game. Found a bug with the trainer card that crashed my game at some point and I had not saved which hurt a little but game is smol so no big deal.
Funny how this game had more secrets than some actual big games. It's good that the game's smol because its very easy to miss some of them which are also connected to the best ending.
I wish the final battle was more skill dependent and less rng dependent. Like through some of those previous interactions you find some TM or item that helps you reliably deal with your opponent.

Tomix9tomix · Mar 14, 2023

Bastonia said:
What are the shiny odds in the game? Cuz i got a shiny Froakie xd

I think you are in the wrong thread

there is no froakie in this game

Haunted Ditto · Apr 11, 2023

A short, but very enjoyable experience:

- I actually misinterpreted the entire game first, lol. I thought it was about a single mom Espeon caring for her Eeveelution children.
The ending cleared it up though.
Positives:
-Each Eeveelutions representing an important piece of life was a nice touch
-Flareon's videogame was neat and Espeon turning it off after the "Jolteon joined" message was cool
-All the "demonic Umbreon" pixelart was gorgeus
-Several endings

Negatives:
-Only negative thing is the length, I guess

Aurora · May 3, 2023

So cute! I saw it on yt I 'll play it for sure.

Midori · Jun 3, 2023

Loved how the Umbreon was animated and how each Eeveelution represented a part of Espeon :D
The watercolors and music box sounds didn't lead me to anticipate the dark but wonderfully written ending (don't wanna spoil it)

GearBreak · Sep 17, 2023

I liked the music.
Anyways, is this loosely inspired by Omori?

GearBreak · Sep 17, 2023

What's the 3rd ending??
Endings I obtained:
- Jump ending
- Collect all parts and go outside

StarWolff · Sep 17, 2023

GearBreak said:
I liked the music.
Anyways, is this loosely inspired by Omori?

yes very much inspired by Omori! (specially the ending) it's also inspired in Yume Nikki

StarWolff · Sep 17, 2023

GearBreak said:
What's the 3rd ending??
Endings I obtained:
- Jump ending
- Collect all parts and go outside

you have to complete all the alien video game and follow the game normally (not jumping)

Completed The World Inside my Room

Macer84

Rookie

Karthik_

Elite 4

Dr Pisy

Rookie

KennyCatches

can he catch his w's?

StarWolff

Cooltrainer

Tomix9tomix

The beetle is waking up

StarWolff

Cooltrainer

Tomix9tomix

The beetle is waking up

Mega Greninja

Professional Amateur Creator

Tomix9tomix

The beetle is waking up

DemICE

QoL junkie

Tomix9tomix

The beetle is waking up

Haunted Ditto

Creator of Pokemon Pandora and Pokemon Climate

Aurora

Trainer

Midori

Novice

GearBreak

Rookie

GearBreak

Rookie

StarWolff

Cooltrainer

StarWolff

Cooltrainer