Creative Storyline Help Request

[updawg734]

I've been working on a fan game called Pokémon: Scrolls of Destiny for some time now. I actually have all of the storyline mapped out for how I think I want everything to go, but I was hoping that someone might be willing to read over the story to give me a second opinion on it. I really want to plot of the game to be dynamic and interesting, as well as full of surprises.

Like I said, I have the whole thing written out, so it's a few pages long. I didn't want to post it all on here right away because 1) it's long and 2) it literally spoils the entire game. That being said, if you would be interested in giving it a read and providing some feedback, I would sincerely appreciate it. Let me know and I can get you the document where I wrote it all out.

Thanks in advance!

 

[TechSkylander1518]

I'd love to help out! The story in just the demo was really interesting, and I can't wait to see where it goes!

 

[updawg734]

I'd love to help out! The story in just the demo was really interesting, and I can't wait to see where it goes!

Awesome! I'll see about getting the document to you through a private message. Thanks!

 

[HollowGap]

What part of the storyline do you need help with? I can lend another perspective if you want.

 

[Greninjauzumaki]

I am also interested in helping you out with the story line. I haven't played the demo but I would like to go through the document which you wrote out and provide some feedback.

 

[SmokedPaprika]

Sure. Hit me up via PM, and I wouldn't mind talking about it for a little bit.