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Starwolf39YT

Starwolf39YT

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I actually do art in my own spare time while making my fangame... I'm a multitasker.. Anyways
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It's a pretty decent piece, actually. I really only have two nitpicks about it : The shading doesn't quite feel right, and the eyes seem off. One eye seems to cross over that green line on the creatures face, while the other one is quite a ways way from it. It kinda makes the face seem flat and weird shaped.
 
Seems like you're not very confident with your mark-making. Usually it's okay to be sloppy at the sketch-level, but when you get to full-colored drawings, it helps to be able to have a certain kind of smoothness to your lines. To achieve this, I'd recommend taking some time out of the next few days to practice drawing straight lines. Just straight lines. Try doing it with your arm, and not your wrist. This doesn't mean that you need to completely switch over to arm-type drawing, just for straighter lines. For curves, feel free to screw around with your wrist. Practice mark-making. Just make different kinds of marks with your pen/pencil. I guarantee you that you'll find a new kind of line control that will aid you in many differing ways, so long as you practice consistently.
 
Starwolf39YT said:
I'm getting there... sorta..
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Drew it for Discord.
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I actually really, really like this one. I love the colours you've picked. The blue and the yellow work really well together. However, towards the top of the blue, it becomes a little distorted. Maybe you can fix that to make it look a little better? I also really love the red shading! It makes the artwork look so much better.
 
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