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Graphic My Current Fakemon-Catalogue - Feedback welcomed

This thread's author wants feedback on a sprite or other graphical art. Be constructive.

TreadingWater

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Never mind me, just sharing my current fakemon-gallery, or at least those with Pokedex-pages...

I have been working hard on getting better at the official Pokemon-artstyle and character-design ever since I started (Subjectively having been a big inspiration to me) but I am always trying to improve, especially when it comes to shading and highlighting.

For the record, these have previously been posted to Deviantart where I go by Dread16Knight25 (let us just say that I made it in middle school and didn't realize until years later that you can't change your DeviantArt-username without an insane amount of hassle). But I barely got any feedback there so I figured that I'll give it a try here.

Jakar is a region loosely based on South East Asia in terms of layout (especially Indonesia and its many islands) but mainly inspired by 'tourist-traps' in general where the pretty environments on the postcards are hiding the poor living-condition that most regular citizens have to live through on a daily basis.

Template by TrueForm on Deviantart

Note: I have been informed that the name Pheroposa is a tad close to the already existing Ultra Beast Pheromosa but I wasn't aware of that when I made my fakemon since I haven't played Sun and Moon (or really any recent pokemon-game for that matter). I have yet to figure out a new name, so feel free to give suggestions.
2nd Note: I have realized that my pictures are rather large and that they might open up in a new window, but I couldn't make them smaller without making the text unreadable. I apologize for the hassle.
 

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Izanagi

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Just some thoughts on your designs:
Snifftle = i think its maybe a bit too elaborate for a first form, i would make it a bit smaller and compact, evolutions are great as they are tho
Galapi and Usatella = idk I don't think their designs work for me. I think the concept is good but I would look at the designs again. Sorry I cant really pinpoint what doesnt work for me
Jakarian Farfetch'd and Far'asol = great designs! I really like them
The eeveelution = again, they don't work for me as eeveelutions. I would look at the other eeveelutions again and change some things. For example I think their legs are a bit too long, the other ones all have rather short limbs like house cats. Also notice the head shape of the eeveelutions is also rather cat like. The concepts work tho!
Shamasoon and Prieluge = again great designs! I think they work exceptionally well
Wyropaima = I like it
Dunsoaring = also great design! Like it. Only thing is maybe that the jump from Dunsparce to Dunsoaring is a bit too big. Maybe a middle evolution would work. But that's just a personal thing.
Chirpaiman and Armagarial = like them
 

Astefia

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Love Dunsoaring.
Like the pikaclone.
The method to evolve Scentvile seems a bit too weird and obscure to find out on its own.
Noxeon looks more like a Liepard crossed with tropical fishes then an Eevee.
Shamasoon and evolution - really cool idea.
Armagarial is really weird imho but works?
 
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