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Writing pokemon pandemia

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Johnny_99

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Hi guys i'm a new user (I am Italian) and i like to write plots for others because i don't have skills to create games. i like to give ideas to see them realized by other people in case they will be appreciated.

In the Reverie Island of Region X, assemblies are held between the world nobles in the dark to manage politics, economics and trigger events that will determine the future of the planet (including epidemics, accidents, revolutions and wars), to their own advantage. The world nobles are the descendants of the ancient kings (there were 20 royal families and 11 were defeated) who fought wars in the past that contributed to the formation of the regions. Thus 9 current regions were born (8 existing regions plus one new one). The nobles are rich people and only 9 houses survived, while the others lost their prestige and were exiled. While maintaining a certain rivalry between them, the nobles manage the fate of the planet together with different agreements. The common people know ancient history but are unaware of their plans.
In Region X there is a criminal organization that carries out various illegal activities, including extortion, hacking, theft and smuggling of pokèmon, illegal sale of supermarket items at a low price (pokèballs, potions...), illegal challenges (betting) and especially producing drugs to strengthen the pokèmon in the fights (protein, zinc, iron, rare candies...). The gang has a secret base on a remote island where there is an abandoned factory to produce the substances (no one knows of its existence).
The nobles, admired by the power of the organization, decide to discover their secret base and take over their activities. No one knows where the substances come from, so the king of region X contacts the head of security to give him the case (your superior).
The mission will be entrusted to a spy (you), or a former champion of the Pokèmon leagues, later became a secret agent, who will have to infiltrate the gang and collect information. The protagonist through the initiation rites will earn the respect of the gang, will then perform various missions.
In addition to the protagonist there will be another spy (your rival) sent by the nobles in the dark. He with a manipulative strategy will infiltrate the gang and will have to be one step ahead of the protagonist. Both of them, after several missions, will finally be led to the factory for an expedition.
After a few months, the leader of the gang begins to feel more and more observed and becomes increasingly paranoid, sensing the presence of a mole. He suspects the new recruit, so he orders the boss (he trusts you and will promote you to the rank of officer) to keep an eye on him and tail him. So the boss will give the suspect several missions while the protagonist will secretly follow him.
During the last expedition, the nobleman meets a hooded person, and the protagonist listening to the conversation will discover that the mysterious man is one of the king's advisors. The speech will reveal all the plans of the houses: the drug factory must be transformed into a poison factory, with the aim of creating a virus that will infect the whole world, so as to force the population to vaccinate with a flu vaccine containing a microchip inside, which allows you to control each individual and eliminate it with a single click of the mouse in case it creates problems.
Once he hears the speech, the protagonist does not know how to react being a double agent: on the one hand he would like to confess to his security chief, on the other hand he is forced to reveal everything to the leader of the gang. So he decides not to reveal anything and says he hasn't gathered any useful information about the new recruit.
The nobles, after collecting the necessary information, decide to proceed with the conquest of the factory, then they implement a plan to capture the leader of the gang. The latter is about to go to another region (already existing) with several henchmen: he entrusts you with the task of managing the factory and giving orders to the other officers for several weeks.
During the journey there will be an ambush, so the leader of the gang and his convoy will be imprisoned, realizing that they have been set up. Shortly thereafter, the factory will be besieged by officers and will be seized by the king. The factory will now be declared inactive, but will instead be occupied by the nobles.
The protagonist has now completed his mission, but still disturbed by the talk of the nobles, he decides to personally investigate them without orders from his superiors, but during his investigation he will be captured by the sect of nobles and taken to a forest. The sect is an organization that acts in the shadows on behalf of the nobles (the mole was one of their followers) and no one knows of their existence.
The protagonist is forced to fight and loses the duel (he has to lose). So he is arrested on false charges and false testimony and is taken to the facility, where he will again meet the leader of the gang. This time it will take some time to regain his trust. He will also make friends with a hacker, a scientist, a burglar and a monk (who will help him in the future).
After months of detention, the protagonist organizes an escape plan with his friends. They will start a riot among the inmates to make some noise. Once escaped, they prepare a plan: attack the factory occupied by the nobles and convince them to cancel the experiments, collect evidence against them, occupy the television station to inform all regions of the existence of the sect.
Once the factory is attacked, Dr. X who manages it on behalf of the nobles, distressed by the defeat, will release the virus from the tanks and infect all regions. So the attackers are accused of being the terrorists and the plans go up in smoke. They manage to hide in a cave for a couple of days.
It is necessary to open the eyes of the masses and to do so they need concrete evidence. So the monk puts a plan into action: the thief with the protagonist will have to sneak into the factory (controlled by the police) at night and sabotage the archives by transferring the virus files on a USB key to bring them back to the base. Once the information is gathered, the hacker will analyze the data and transmit it to the television stations by hacking the servers in the region, while the scientist will study a vaccine.
Once the plan is implemented and the secret information disclosed, the people decide to attack their respective royal palaces en masse. The nobles once discovered decide to attack the protagonists together with their sect, but this time security will intervene and there will be several duels until the arrest of the nobles.
 
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